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"My Yellow Rose"
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"My Yellow Rose" |
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Poetal Member
since 2009-11-09
Posts 74Texas, United States |
"my yellow rose" i think that i shall never see a flower as lovely as thee to your beautiful skin it could never compare nor to the fragrance of your fresh auburn hair as the heavenly skys above have stars that shine oh so magnificently bright only through my yellow rose's bright blue beyes can i see their shining radiant light as the western winds blow her soft silky hair to that special sight truly nothing can compare i write this heartfelt poem to make myself very clear i love you now and forever my loving precious dear AL Inmon |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A very poignant touching poem Al and romantic as well, much enjoyed. Take care. Lindsay |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Very nice. |
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Poetal Member
since 2009-11-09
Posts 74Texas, United States |
Lamar Thanks for your time to review.  AL AL Inmon |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hello my friend...Such a rose was my mother and wife's favorite....Me, the thorns get me every time.....good to see you......... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sweet~~ M |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
this is for such beauty and sentiments that poetry can exist too, thanks for the puren (french sense) poem. regards yann |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Great tribute, Al, to someone who is obviously a great lady. Your love has never lost that adolescent fervour. Good read. Peace Jim "We are stardust: we are golden: and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden." --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock" |
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