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Open Poetry #45

Of Eventide...

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2009-11-10 10:14 PM

Exhalations of an evening breeze,
...caress in fading light,
Sweeping dust and scent of man,
...as Helios takes his flight.
Purified, the air of dusk,
...reveals high heaven's vault,
Allowing mortals such as I,
...to savor night's exalt.
Venus first, as welkin's queen,
...leads twilight's promenade,
Followed closely by her minions,
...in a celestial calvacade,
A million, trillion, twinkling stars,
...splendor without end
My fetters freed, I upward soar,
...this earthly realm transcend.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

1 posted 2009-11-10 10:21 PM

Nice write Tim, you have painted a tranquil word picture. Well written.

Lindsay

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2009-11-10 11:16 PM

Actually I was about to see this was a extremely "peaceful" piece.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2009-11-14 09:08 PM

How very beautiful! *S*

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2009-11-17 09:07 PM

Fabulous and more...James

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2009-11-17 09:21 PM

You know and have known for a long while
how pleased I have been of your writings;
you should know also that I am more than
proud to know you as a Kansan.

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