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ken206573
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0 posted 2009-11-10 11:47 AM



Wondering what's to become of me
am I out of date, a model that is not
needed or am i made
in a world that's
out of date?
My program is as new as others
yet my system works on
different levels.
they are smart, yet they are
inputing trash, and accepting
things that have no true data.
They crash and some don't recover
they say I'm out of date, since i
don't follow their system.

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Poetal
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1 posted 2009-11-10 12:33 PM


Wow I am an old model myself a 1948 model LOL!!
Thanks for the cute write and deep thoughts of wonder?

AL Inmon

Margherita
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2 posted 2009-11-10 05:14 PM


Bravo! You are IN! Because you think with your own mind.

Well done.

Love,
Margherita

kingsangel
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3 posted 2009-11-10 07:42 PM


I'd say though not outdated i can relate! i think it's the playing catch up that makes it seem that way.
kingsangel
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4 posted 2009-11-10 07:43 PM


I'd say though not outdated i can relate! i think it's the playing catch up that makes it seem that way.
ken206573
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5 posted 2009-11-13 11:06 AM


thank you all for reading this, and at first I didn't know what title to put for it so I choosed to put wonder silly isn't it


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