Hypnotizing Chickens ( With a nod to Iggy Pop )

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Open Poetry #45

Hypnotizing Chickens ( With a nod to Iggy Pop )

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

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Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2009-11-10 09:39 AM

To dance as if you're hypnotizing chickens
cavorting 'round the floor as one been stricken,
contortions triggered solely by the sound
afflicted as the room spins 'round and 'round.

Flailing arms and legs akimbo to the beat
as St. Vitus pulls the strings tied to your feet,
abandon sets the pace as you're propelled
on waves of sound that rise into the swell.

A whirling dervish set on overload...
somewhere a chicken tries to cross the road.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

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1 posted 2009-11-10 09:43 AM

DM,

Man, you almost did more for me than any cup of coffee! I am so trying to wake up gently and now you have me laughing.

Laughing is good first thing in the morning - and so is a dose of poetry from the good Dr.

Thank you and have a good one.

A

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

2 posted 2009-11-10 10:20 AM

Alison,
Thank you, and you're welcome. Now I'say that's starting your day off on the right foot. And a one, and a two...
Doc

ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

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3 posted 2009-11-10 10:41 AM

Hey there Doc. I'm enjoying your poem of hypnotizing chickens alot. Laughter is the best medicine, and a good way of starting the evening well

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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4 posted 2009-11-10 05:38 PM

Smiling here. This is terrific.

Love,
Margherita

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

5 posted 2009-11-14 08:54 PM

LOL... And here I never knew what my dance style was. LOL Next time I step on a foot, I'll have my explanation ready with my apology! LOL Enjoyed this!!! *G*

Osprey
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since 2009-04-12

Posts 249

6 posted 2009-11-14 09:06 PM

The last time I hypnotised a chicken I was no way so active. But, I liked your poem and I'm gonna whisk up my ass and dance around that stunned, old hen.

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