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Sleeveless |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Sleeveless love became the bizarre in my normality where I became a good cover story something that I looked for that is lacking within me becoming infatuated with animals with long sharp claws that tear at skin and leave you standing bloody dripping pouring yourself out till nothing is left stealing all there is living the lie now I float drowning without a drop of water there is much I know about love, a lot I don’t and some I don’t want to know honestly, I just don’t have the time "I'm so hard to handle |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 I don't want to get started because it wouldn't help. Just know we miss you terribly, and I sure hope that someone gets what is coming to them, and you get all the good stuff.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Impressive, dear Helen! Infatuations can make us lose the ability to see behind the surface. This is an incredibly well written piece, may you find peace! Love, Margherita |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
wow, good write Helen. Glad 2 see your back. Luv bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"there is much I know about love, a lot I don’t and some I don’t want to know honestly, I just don’t have the time" Words that could stand alone, Helen. Hope all is well.  M |
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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
If you don't want to wear it on your sleeve, go sleeveless. Nice title for a great write. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Hi Helen, glad to see you posting again. This poem about sums it up when it comes to love, Great write. Ida |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good one |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
welcome back Helen, glad you're posting once more. I've missed this kind of writing that flows from your unique poetic gift. ARCTIC WIND |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice piece of writing...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
now I float drowning without a drop of water there is much I know about love, a lot I don’t and some I don’t want to know honestly, I just don’t have the time I agree with M... this is a poem in itself... and a great one... I can feel the exhaustion. *S* It's great to see you posting! |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
That ol' devil needs to be told to keep his ass off your chair. Until you are ready for a good tete-a- tete. But, l reckon you are not in the mood for his bullshit. |
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