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Open Poetry #45
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Michael G
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0 posted 2009-11-10 01:48 AM

my first, the essence of
a trip to my mind, casual
allowance indignation
covering my laughter.
my first, the wonder of
the souls eye, tripped up
to include how I find
ridicules the world is.
my first, slipping the
confines of childhood
to embrace her own
small step of freedom.
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1 posted 2009-11-10 01:55 AM

I really like this, Michael.  It's wonderful to feel the love and pride that you have for your daughter.

Alison
Margherita
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2 posted 2009-11-10 05:03 PM

This is indeed such a significant moment, especially for fathers!

Beautiful!

Love,
Margherita
Lamar Cole
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3 posted 2009-11-13 09:09 PM

Children are God's gift to the parents.
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