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When Summer Ends
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When Summer Ends |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
When Summer Ends When summer ends The dawn Sunsets slowly To the sea Leaves fall quietly To the ground Wind whistles softly Now time has arrive For winter All the leaves turning into golden red, brown Where now winter shown its bliss When summer ends softly Where dawn shown its way To the daylight Of morning Morning dawn on it's grass Morning dew Where the sun shown Ray of light When summer ens Slowly winter starts Cold weather Cold breeze All the signs of weather When summer ends Fallen leaves To the ground.... |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
well done enjoyed *smiles* |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
melodious images and sweet invitation of weather certainties, I love your poem. swift and musical. yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The images you evoke are soft and lovely with a touch of melancholy. Love, Margherita  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
vandana - Like a poetic peek into a poetic revelation. I liked this. Namyh |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
You have painted a lovely picture with words with this cute poem Vandana. much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I will surely miss summer but winter is okay too. Good write! |
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