Repost of a Duet....she will smile

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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2009-11-04 09:35 PM

The door ajar, the culprit in,
his shoe was chewed in places six.
A paw print here, a puddle there,
the latch would now be first to fix.

A scoundrel small of fluff and eye
did sneak between the opening,
A soulful frown and whimp'ring cry
would take from him the anger's sting.

Her thoughts transposed in artful she
To share a likened child with he
And puppy prince could do no wrong
His deeds so cute, his trail so long

And share she did…the days and nights
That knit the sweaters, calmed his frights
The two a.m. was manly made
But she stood by with cheer displayed

The thickest towels to soak his brow
Perhaps once his, in service now
A teething ring of leather strap
Perchance the founding fingers tap

Through gritted teeth surprise, un-clued
It seemed that he became unglued
This pup was cute and very shrewd
A heart was won, this fluffy dude.

A trail was laid in wag of tinkle
across the den and to the door.
It brought a frown and nose’s wrinkle
This was enough, she heard his roar.

He called the Vet about a neuter
and caught the stare of her in glare.
She took away their one computer,
no longer would she and he share.

And now the bed is warmed by one
who wears the blue jeans and long socks
The couch is where they fight in fun
as she plays and he tugs her locks.

For man’s best friend can be sweet talked
by woman’s ways....and away they walked!!!

Even the pooch gets the upper hand, errr....paw.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2009-11-04 10:45 PM

LOL, this is hilarious!
I'm left wondering who 'she' is???

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2009-11-05 06:12 AM

What an uplifting write!
Great to read you again Mag.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2009-11-05 08:37 AM

This was a fun read, dear Barry! It did uplift her, so I guess she smiled too!

Yes, it is so good to meet you on the blue pages again, dear Barry. Stay a while please!

Love,
Margherita

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2009-11-08 03:23 PM

Enjoyed this immensely! *S* Great job!!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2009-11-10 04:22 PM

O: I am speechless, a great story\write!

ARCTIC WIND

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2009-11-13 07:52 PM

Well goodness me, I don't remember seeing this one before, but it must have been, and maybe even I was there to read...

but this oh so well fits my current scenario of two pups and a life.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2009-11-13 07:55 PM

For man’s best friend can be sweet talked
by woman’s ways

indeed

this reminds me of me

Nancy Hardin
Member

since 2009-12-02

Posts 58
Nevada, United States of America

8 posted 2009-12-09 05:42 PM

Very playful and cute...I enjoyed this so much!

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

9 posted 2009-12-09 07:41 PM

A delight to read Magnus, I think one

of your best.much enjoyed. Take care.

Lindsay

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