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Open Poetry #45

Incentives

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2009-11-04 04:44 PM

eve :

                       it surprises me

                       the way he prizes me

                       it's as if his Publisher's Clearing House prize is me

friend :

                      i know what you mean Eve

                      my boyfriend

                      the way he sizes me

                      you’d think the only thing he sees in his eyes is me

eve :

                                                         exactly

                                                                                                                    love,

                                                                                                                     eve & howard

AncientHippie
Member

since 2009-10-15

Posts 411
Surfing the Cosmic Flow

1 posted 2009-11-04 05:51 PM

I am sensing in your work the arrival of a new style of poetry: cool, current, and easy to text. Good work, Howard (and Eve, too, of course).
Namaste
Jim, the AncientHippie

"We are stardust: we are golden: and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden." --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

SlowlyFallAway
Member

since 2008-08-29

Posts 279
North Carolina

2 posted 2009-11-05 09:56 AM

this is so unique. i love your stuff

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

3 posted 2009-11-05 06:33 PM

thanks guys

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2009-11-09 05:51 PM

Enjoyed...James

Kosmic888
Junior Member

since 2009-11-01

Posts 29
Vancouver Canada

5 posted 2009-11-09 06:02 PM

this is brilliant, love it!!! There are degrees of Eve in all of us, that's for sure... thx for the reminder - Peace Ron

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