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Torn Cloth and Cotton Sky
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Torn Cloth and Cotton Sky |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Torn Cloth and Cotton Sky Inept, the mounting wind circles vacant arms Spire upward, shivering in plea the sun Catching tails of cotton veils, wrapped the kite Seeking freedom from limbs; seeking warmth Chuckle clouds, puffed and lithe Humming to the chimes, their slow lilting smile Plump across the blue gray sky, capping tree Bravado wind, continuous in vigor Slips an icy digit through the bodice lace Sudden tears shake kite to relented dress Footfalls below, crunch scattered clad now lost Eyes up, glitter beams of yellow Warm will the season cloak the cold And fill the up stretched arms of change Copyright Kkh 11/4/09 |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Very sad, autumny piece, Kathleen. Full of vivid imagery speaking strongly of departures and starting over. Strong work. Namaste Jim "We are stardust: we are golden: and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden." --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock" |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am never disappointed when I see you have posted on the board. This was excellent. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: An incredibly profound write, dear Kathleen. A poetic gem. Love, Margherita |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
for a few seconds, I was almost convinced that this was a democrat's way to peddle the change of the country.......... but, no way...the weather is blessing us with all sorts of tidbids of "whazzup"... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that ending was awesome, girl! |
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