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Open Poetry #45

Blame the Moon

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2009-11-04 05:02 AM

Blame it on the moon
as she slowly turns
her shadows to light

evolving, revolving
in concert
to the 28 days

as spirit flies
with men on the rise
the vulnerable moon dies

a woman cries
in silence
to rise

again

[This message has been edited by martiniat8 (11-04-2009 07:48 AM).]

AncientHippie
Member

since 2009-10-15

Posts 411
Surfing the Cosmic Flow

1 posted 2009-11-04 08:28 AM

Good solid work here, Kenneth. First appears to be pastoral moonbeam, but then we sense the human conflict beneath the surface. Good read.
Peace
Jim

"We are stardust: we are golden: and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden." --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2009-11-05 01:26 PM

I agree a very good poem, and timely.

I remember asking a poet here now passed, Marge Tindal, if there was a full moon there too?

I think that was the most embarrassing blonde moment in my life!

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

3 posted 2009-11-05 03:08 PM

Thanks Hippie!

Lol Mysteria, yeah I've had a few blonde moments myself, mostly as a child. I once asked my brother in San Francisco if it was raining there too because it was raining here in Dallas. :P What can I say, I thought when it rains in one place it rained everywhere.

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