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leather river moan |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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 we were now afternoons in maple leaves making our shadows into dancing lovers beside mouthfulls of leather river laughter I had known your breasts with my eyes how they were the greek key of dreams to be strummed on moan chord mornings when we both wore our sensitive side out and kept those lovely sounds on our lips then pressed them against and into each other so we could devour the other side of our love ______________ daark (do of water) (photoart by dark stranger) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
we were now afternoons in maple leaves making our shadows into dancing lovers What incredible images... both the photo and the ones your words paint! *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern..thanks so much lady!! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
DS your poetry is so vivid, when I've finished running my eyes over and over it, I feel like smoking a cigarette.~L |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms LG, I should send you a cigar...they last so much longer...thanks for the review ms |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
in the autumn frost their breath fogs sacred mirrors, whispered revealings. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi it is your river but you know the velvet side leatherless freedom |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
when we both wore our sensitive side out and kept those lovely sounds on our lips then pressed them against and into each other so we could devour the other side of our love ________ always lovely  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms browneyes...I sure enjoy when you model my penskins..thanks babe |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
I adore what you do with water, and the photo is lovely too. L, H |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms UBP thank you lady friend |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I adore this in its whole, picture too. When you don't post new poems, I must go diving and I am ever so happy to have found this marvel. Love, Margherita |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Another sensual adventure for your readers, DS. Strong sense of emotion here, but then... that's what you do! Well done, Stranger. Peace Jim "We are stardust: we are golden: and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden." --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock" |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
"when we both wore our sensitive side out" Wonderfully profound, you paint beauty in layers. |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
BEAUTIFUL photo, Dark! It does look like a river of leather. but REALLY enjoyed this line of yours... to be strummed on moan chord mornings Wonderful read |
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