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martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2009-11-03 10:59 PM



She's got that sticky ticky
that itchy itchy

tick tocky
click talky

talk lock-ee

that sticky ticky
while the clock goes
ticky clicky

clippy cloppy
clippy cloppy

selling rocks
dealing rocks

those girls are just
THOSE girls are
all just

they're all just

picking choosing
and you're just
flick'n lose'n

holding folding

while they're

picking
picking

your hand
for you

hiding behind them
they already got them

rocks
diamond rocks

while you're
just
hiding hiding

they got them
they GOT them

diamond rocks

and you got them
you've had them
demon rocks

selling on the
selling out for the

shiver shiver
that shiver shiver

the devil is there

clip clopp'n
heels talkin'

can't you hear the

clip cloppin'
tick tockin'

runnin' runnin'
FOOL

down by the
sell'n out for the

shiver
FOOL

runnin' from that
click clock

that
tick tock

that icky icky
FOOL

friends say
she got that icky icky
he's just an icky icky

that one called me
her friend just called me

that sticky icky
that sticky icky
fool

RUN! RUN!
runner
FOOL!

sell'n on there
down by there
sell'n on there
down by there

river river

used to run fast
used to run fast

got it made
got it made

king queen
of hearts
turn spades

and I'm just that?
they say I'm just that

sticky icky
that ticky icky

when I'm the
"RIVER" "RIVER"
fool...


[This message has been edited by martiniat8 (11-04-2009 01:14 AM).]

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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2009-11-04 12:48 PM


Hey martiniat,well done, very pleasant read

yann

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2 posted 2009-11-05 11:19 PM


Wow.  This is different and it is interesting.  I like your style.

A

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