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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2009-11-02 06:12 PM


Just Me & My Sweetheart

There's a marvelous
full moon tonight
with silky clouds
embracing the light.
My heart is craving
my sweetheart,
too many nights
we've been apart.
She's flying in
on Wednesday
from the cold
streets of Chicago
to the warmth
of Honolulu.
Soon we will see
each others smiles
and missing will
become hugging
and kissing,
no longer to
be denied,
thoughts and desires
will be satisfied
as love & closeness
saturate these two hearts,
within the fruits of blessings,
just me and my sweetheart.

JamesLee
01November
2009



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oh_ok
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since 2009-07-20
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1 posted 2009-11-02 06:36 PM


I love this...
And as being in a long-distance relationship, myself.. I can relate!

Blessings.

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2 posted 2009-11-02 06:38 PM


Oh, this is beautiful... I'm so glad for you! *S*
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3 posted 2009-11-03 02:15 AM


I am so happy for you both, James.  How wonderful that you are making this long distance love work.  Have fun and enjoy each other.

Alison

nourzihane
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4 posted 2009-11-03 04:25 AM


How beautiful to see this pocket of good feelings that carry the most beautiful meanings

Thank you
Nourzihane

2islander2
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5 posted 2009-11-03 04:40 AM


love this beautiful romance.

regards

yann

Margherita
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6 posted 2009-11-03 03:37 PM


Ein Wiedersehen wie schön!

The gift for both is about to unravel, I see. So lovely your devotion, dear James.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2009-11-03 06:01 PM


I'm a tad bit envious. I'll be watching Biggest Loser on TV ~ alone! I think I'd prefer meeting my long-distant sweetheart in Honolulu beneath a full moon...Sounds divinely romantic...

I'm happy for the two of you! Enjoy each other!

Love beaneath a Honolulu moon,

Linda

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8 posted 2009-11-03 06:18 PM


I love this piece, James.  Isn't it wonderful how the emptiness of apart can be cured by the magic moment of together?  Enjoy the Hawaiian moon.
Very best regards
Jim

"We are stardust:  we are golden:  and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden."  --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

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