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AncientHippie
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0 posted 2009-11-02 10:41 AM




I once thought with musing mind,
What if one should suddenly find
(I chuckle when I think of it!)
Oneself a snake, in a mongoose pit?
And would it not make people think,
And rave, and make a frightful stink,
Taking stock of their senses while they squirm,
If transformed into a worm?
Perhaps they'd not be so bigot
If changed into an ocelot.
Would they retain their hate and greed
As a patch of motley, brown seaweed?

     If rocks and trees and dogs,
     And elephants and hogs,
     And even a fallen leaf,
     Complain not of their grief,
     Then why should mortal man, as such,
     Make of so little, so damned much?


"We are stardust:  we are golden:  and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden."  --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2009-11-02 11:13 AM


exactly! I'd like to give this to a few people I know.
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2 posted 2009-11-02 12:20 PM


I once saw a bumper sticker that said, "The louder you complain, the longer God lets you live." Maybe that's the prevailing thought." You do raise a good question.
                                  Ida

AncientHippie
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3 posted 2009-11-03 01:51 PM


PS and Marchm:  Thank you.  Your comments are always welcome.
Peace
Jim

"We are stardust:  we are golden:  and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden."  --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

playing.with.crayons
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4 posted 2009-11-04 01:25 AM


My dog is very vocal when he is not satisfied with our service! And our chooks, well they never shut up.

But its true. The number of times I've heard lately (exam period) "I'm going to die" "This is the worst" "Sucks to be me..." (you get the idea)...

well then trundle on out to the Amazon and see how you go bunking down with the pirahnas!

I really liked your write. Thanks a bunch!

AncientHippie
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5 posted 2009-11-04 08:33 AM


Thank you, Crayons.  Your comments are much appreciated.
Jim

"We are stardust:  we are golden:  and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden."  --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

latearrival
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6 posted 2009-11-06 02:46 PM


Thank you. We live from day to day and what we choose to make of it is up to us not others. I need to read  some pleasant  thoughts to counter act the sad and negative we see and read  about every day. I always love the song title.
I Never Promised You a Rose Garden

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7 posted 2009-11-06 03:48 PM


LOL, oh, for a magic wand!


AncientHippie
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8 posted 2009-11-09 03:07 PM


The magic wand is not needed for some people, Midnitesun:  they autotransform every time they open their mouths.
Cheers
Jim

"We are stardust:  we are golden:  and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden."  --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

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