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there is always somebody hidden behind a door
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there is always somebody hidden behind a door |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
there is always somebody hidden behind a door, which thinks of the thick night, of the war of the sexes, of the words that he hates, which catches ordinary cats to deliver them to the devil, somebody who spies on the light of your eyes, then appropriates it as the clam sea, there is always somebody hidden behind a door, who is afraid in the daytime and of the others, who makes you slide in the hands as a wireless puppet, who knows the herd of the lies, He catchs you in spite of you and make you look like the chaos, the animals of his jealousy… There is always somebody behind a door, the silence or the fear, the door of the heart of people. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Guess sometimes there are doors that should stay shut.... Well done, Yann. |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
I've always been the curious type to look behind the door, and try to bring that someone out of their shell. It backfires sometimes, but it's always an interesting experiment. A nice write here, yann. Goddess grant me the serenity to accept the things that I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can and the wisdom to know the difference. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Somehow disquieting no doubt, you caught this atmosphere so very well, dear Yann. When we dare to look deep inside the heart of people we are almost always surprised to find that they only lack love. Whenever I decide to look straight into the eye of what frightens me - behind a door yes why not - I call upon the assistance of my Heavenly protection, Archangel Michael. With him at my side I feel almost invulnerable. Love and radiance. Margherita  |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Wow, Yann: Sombre portrait of paranoia. Believe me, if my life were in the state you describe, I would seek to adjust my medication. Well done piece of gothic art. Jim "We are stardust: we are golden: and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden." --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock" |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This poem gives one something to think abou, yann. You never know what you're going to find behind that door. Ida |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
yes indeed midnitsun, but almost impossible, if you don't open a door, someone will do it, thanks for the comment and read. regards yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks rachael forr the confession, you have the best situation in the aventure. regards yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Margherita, I understand what you mean and what deprive ourselves from angels help, you do the right choice ignoring all these facts. Thanks for the deep comment and read. regards yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks a lot Jim, I like the tone and humour of your comment, very pertinent way. regards yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks Ida for sharing, we never know indeed. yann |
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