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naturegirl
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since 2009-09-30
Posts 168
England

0 posted 2009-11-01 07:09 AM


You love me,
hold me tenderly
You want to
be with me
You can't bear
to leave me
But then you
Hate me for
binding you too
Closely and taking
your freedom yet
You say you
still love me
You won't call
or return mine
Turning the screw
shredding my nerves
How I wonder
could you stick
In the knife
and twist so
Malevolently my bruised
and aching heart
Whilst I wait
for you to
Make up your
mind I just

Sit and wait...

[This message has been edited by naturegirl (11-01-2009 09:08 AM).]

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tommy738
Junior Member
since 2009-10-28
Posts 33

1 posted 2009-11-01 10:18 AM


wow struck me to the core I couldnt have described how I feel about my situation and better than you just wrote. I really enjoyed this one thank you.
naturegirl
Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168
England
2 posted 2009-11-01 11:34 AM


hi tommy, personal experience loads of it unfortunately. i think it helps me to deal with it..well that's what I think anyway...
martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
3 posted 2009-11-01 04:01 PM


glad to know Im not the only one goig through something like this, my sympathies
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4 posted 2009-11-03 02:45 AM


So good - I would not want to go back to this ever.

Alison

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