Open Poetry #45 |
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Waiting... |
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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England ![]() |
You love me, hold me tenderly You want to be with me You can't bear to leave me But then you Hate me for binding you too Closely and taking your freedom yet You say you still love me You won't call or return mine Turning the screw shredding my nerves How I wonder could you stick In the knife and twist so Malevolently my bruised and aching heart Whilst I wait for you to Make up your mind I just Sit and wait... [This message has been edited by naturegirl (11-01-2009 09:08 AM).] |
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tommy738 Junior Member
since 2009-10-28
Posts 33 |
wow struck me to the core I couldnt have described how I feel about my situation and better than you just wrote. I really enjoyed this one thank you. |
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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England |
hi tommy, personal experience loads of it unfortunately. i think it helps me to deal with it..well that's what I think anyway... |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
glad to know Im not the only one goig through something like this, my sympathies |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
So good - I would not want to go back to this ever. Alison |
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