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Open Poetry #45

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viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-10-29 11:20 PM

(I get a little fire in my blood-
too early sometimes-
and ruin things
by burning holes in the sheets.)

She bit my finger,
and had to use her hand
(to catch all her breath
from running back down her throat)
as the nails burst into blue flames.
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Bad Habits

Paul

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

[This message has been edited by viking_metal (10-31-2009 10:04 AM).]

AncientHippie
Member

since 2009-10-15

Posts 411
Surfing the Cosmic Flow

1 posted 2009-10-30 08:52 AM

Quite heavy, Paul. I am going to have to come back to this one tomorrow, after I focus on it for a while. Thanks for making me dig.
(and, as the ancient hippies always say, "dig we must.")
Jim

"We are stardust: we are golden: and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden." --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

2 posted 2009-10-30 10:25 PM

I am glad to stimulate your brain.

Thanks for taking the time to post, hippie.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2009-10-31 02:26 AM

Where are you when I can't get my woodstove going? I could use some of that burn ability. Seriously, I am loving this.

Ali-ember

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2009-10-31 05:05 AM

It looks like some bad habits are breathtaking!

Love,
Margopargo

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

5 posted 2009-10-31 10:03 AM

Aliburn, thanks. I am lucky to have you as a reader.

Margopargofargodargolargo, great to hear from you again. Glad I could borrow a bit of your wind.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

MorningStar
Member

since 2009-10-26

Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa

6 posted 2009-10-31 09:39 PM

All I can say is this is HOTT!! Totally loved it.

Aenea

If I don't say it...who will?

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

7 posted 2009-11-01 01:06 AM

Aw thanks morningstar.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

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