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tommy738
Junior Member

since 2009-10-28

Posts 33

0 posted 2009-10-28 09:03 PM

The white rose is pure, innocent and untouched
White like an empty paper for us to write our future on
Blank for us to color with our love together
It’s as pure as the love I have for you
This white rose I give with dream that we renew our love
With this single rose I do proclaim
A love so innocent and pure
That I will forever share to the end with you

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2009-10-28 09:32 PM

Welcome to Passions.
Quite a romantic write.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-10-29 08:52 AM

Pure innocent love and a white rose are a winning combination. Nice romantic poem.

Welcome to Pip!

Love,
Margherita

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2009-10-29 09:14 AM

Very lovely! Welcome to Passions!!

tommy738
Junior Member

since 2009-10-28

Posts 33

4 posted 2009-10-29 01:30 PM

thank you I wrote this for my wife with whom Im seperated from and gave this to her on our 4 year anniversary that we still went together to even though we are serperated I hold true to the symbolysim of the white rose being blank and hoping to start a new deeper love with her.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2009-10-29 07:00 PM

Enjoyed...James

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

6 posted 2009-10-29 09:57 PM

Made Me Smile! Love It.

I Thought of You Today,
And What We Could've Had
For A Brief Moment I Had You
And Still, I Somehow Knew
I'd Have To Let Go

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2009-10-29 11:06 PM

What a sweet poem to her. Welcome to Passions, and if you check your email there will be a surprise welcome from all of us here. Enjoy the forums.

Mysteria

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

8 posted 2009-10-30 12:00 PM

GREAT 1st write. I share your feelings and thoughts of this, love how you refer to the petals as clean white sheets of paper, to write the future on. Brilliant!

rachaelfuchsberger

Senior Member

since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

9 posted 2009-10-31 09:44 PM

Welcome to PiP! I definitely loved this one. Excellent way to introduce yourself!

Goddess grant me the serenity to accept the things that I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can and the wisdom to know the difference.

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