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viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-10-29 12:36 PM

We were laughing small laughs
and enjoying a quiet lunch in the city
I don't like the city much, but I visit from time to time
people there they don't look you in the idea

I told her about a dog I know named Legend
and she asked what would happen,
since I loved him so,
if the earth chose to take him from me

I paused for a moment
and told her that I didn't know what it was like
but I imagine it'd be like waking up in the middle
of open heart surgery.

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midnight thought, nothing important.
Paul

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2009-10-29 03:21 AM

people there they don't look you in the idea

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What a great line, Paul. And it's like waking up to a hole in the sky. That's what it was like for me anyway. You are on a poetic roll just telling your stories in the wonderful way that you do.

A

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

2 posted 2009-10-29 07:49 AM

Thanks very much, alaboo.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

AncientHippie
Member

since 2009-10-15

Posts 411
Surfing the Cosmic Flow

3 posted 2009-10-29 09:04 AM

Hello, Paul. Another good one. I especially like the keeper line "people there they don't look you in the idea" Way cool, and pretty well says it all. Thanks, and
Namaste
Jim

"We are stardust: we are golden: and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden." --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2009-10-29 09:21 AM

I know the feeling...though for me, it's my cats. *S* I love the love in this! *S*

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

5 posted 2009-10-29 03:41 PM

Jim, thanks a lot. I enjoy that you keep reading my work. It's nice to have a new reader.

Suthern good to hear from you again! Thanks for reading. Glad you liked it.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

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