Open Poetry #45 |
The Half-Price Hostage |
martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
(it probably won't read right, unless i read it aloud, but here ya go) "The Half-Price Hostage" I sat in the corner, sipping my tea easily mistaken, for old saloon whiskey and up on the sound and in through the doors was the music and the resemblance of a man dressed in black the swinging doors, had been fixed and old music, filled the mix this was a flashback and a tribute to the dearly departed Johnny Cash My eyes became focused and I hid behind stacks behind books of dead poets like bodies in racks He aimed with his finger through the see-through counter glass like the gun for the man in Reno saying "I'll take the lumpy loaf, last" for a slice of bread can be mistaken for Brad all that I knew was it looked really bad then over the glare and through frightened stare came the tunes to the soothing through the cool evening air it was a call to the Sheriff and his faithful deputy so saved from my worries so safe was, poor me rescued by Billie aka "Doc" Holiday held hostage at Song Point at the Half-Price, Black Forest Coffee Cafe |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
That was just a great look into the notorious old west, and so much fun! |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
lol that's what i was going for, funny, though it's just what happened to me yesterday |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I love what you write, this poem is specially imaginative and pleasant. regards yann |
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