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Open Poetry #45

I will be

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2009-10-27 08:37 PM

intertwined
can you tell which leg is yours
and which is mine
whose breath
is whose

I am here for you
body and soul
just tug those heart strings
and see what song will play today
you might be surprised
though you never are

can you read me like a book again
just once more
I promise
find your favorite parts
and say them out loud
tell me who you think I am
and I will be

days like these
tell me I am yours

naturegirl
Member

since 2009-09-30

Posts 168
England

1 posted 2009-10-27 09:06 PM

I enjoyed reading this and identified with it too....

threadbear
Senior Member

since 2008-07-10

Posts 817
Indy

2 posted 2009-10-28 01:00 AM

You write well of the joys of growing closer, and wanting to please.
The walls have no edges
in your work, Exhale.
T.bear

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2009-10-28 11:57 AM

I love this~L

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