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Nobody But Myself
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Nobody But Myself |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nobody But Myself When I need reasurrance you give me silence. When I need truth you give me control, lies and manipulation. When I need to trust and believe you give me no one to trust and believe in. When I want you and I need you you have given me nobody but myself. JamesLee 26October 2009 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A touch of disillusion in this one, dear James. The awareness of being able to cope with everything on our own is precious. Love, Margherita |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
Wow. How did you get inside of my head...? What a painfully realistic piece - well done. Aenea If I don't say it...who will? |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Great work, James. You were obviously given the greatest gift of all: self-reliance! A very difficult transition from seeking support from someone to realising that strength within. Good wordcraft with sombre images. Namaste Sutra 30: Language reflects the Truth of one’s Reality: listen carefully when others speak. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
a little sad, but sometimes women reveal men to themselves and they can feel alone, enjoyed your poem. yann |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This makes me think of times that I have felt lonely - there is a touch of bitter sadness and I understand it, dear James. A |
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