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Miss Abagail Mannering Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136byron, il |
I stand 0n the 0utside l00king in.. waiting f0r the crumbs 0f y0ur affecti0n. ever awkward and inept... never really accepted, Barely t0llerated. y0ur indifference burns me- kn0wing i NEVER truly mattered... & every W0rd uttered was ALWAYS lip service CRAP t0 mess with my head. yet, like an addict i cann0t stay away. y0ur presence is my f0rm 0f dementia, designed t0 t0rture me bey0nd endurance. y0u are my very 0wn hell. "Ya have to kiss a lot of frogs before you meet your prince... just watch out for all the pond scum!!!" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
interesting use of digits here...the message is dynamic within them |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Miss Abigail Mannering - I enjoyed your words and their intent. Keeep the faith. Just when we think we don't have a choice, some strength whispers we do. Namyh |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Miss Abagail Mannering - smile, as hell will pass by. Nice write of inner emotions... BC |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Miss Mannering. I enjoyed this piece very much, but it took me several reads to get over the 0s...I thought for a moment that I was in AIM or Texting Hell. Once that passed, I saw what you were saying and came to appreciate it. Peace Jim Sutra 25: Remember that a pile of ordure is simply that: Seek not to give it meaning. |
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shalisadefa Member
since 2009-08-13
Posts 114 |
guess this is the lemon talking  very sharp writing but tell us what's up with the '0'? |
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