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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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 dare I wonder of your thighs on those mornings and of your satin bellied bay how the tides may have listened then to your mystery moaning against their timbers and how seduction of your charms and arms has unbuttoned the guards of neptune and left them exposed just as aching masts that prod a jealous sky for her writhing rights and what passage would they employ for favor if the winds were given as their blessings would they bend their bows into your lathering and shudder into the surges of your urgency dare I wonder too, of your eyes when they glaze and you whisper to the gods of those sins that made you more mortal than you were before and how you envied those evenings of eve when she was the more of serpentine inclined _____________ daark (do of water)(art by DS) |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Strong and erotic, DS, with loads of sensual symbols and images. I walked away from this one breathing just a tad heavily. Sweet last line. Jim Sutra 25: Remember that a pile of ordure is simply that: Seek not to give it meaning. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
D-I feel my dinghy rise on the tide of this one...and as alway you art is superb~L |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
AH, thank you sir, it is a tempting little harbor that waxes me silent each day as I view it there. ____________ Ms LG, thank you ms for exploring these waters. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am spellbound by the picture and the words again. To open these poetic and artistic treasures is like stepping into sacred space and being offered a magical interpretation of what caught your eye and your imagination. Truly amazing stuff! Love, Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar..thanks so much special lady!! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You are just blowing me out of the blue water with your poetry! Gosh D~ This is so picturesque, your poem captures the shimmer glisten and smoothes the underside of the wind that ripples beneath the surface. Love this moolit rhapsody you wrote. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bluezy..thanks babe..it is just down the road and am sure you have been by there.. |
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