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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
River Winding Meandering, my path does glide through mountain passes, gaps and slides where, then, when reached, the other side, I smoothly turn to lake most placid in the wake of wanderings made through the pines as barricades of different kinds brought twists and turns and bends and winds that metaphor does make me out to be a snake, but, I think, more, that I should be a fortitude, a simile of something that is flowing free, an advocate of life. God bless, Lighthouse Bob |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
that metaphor does make me out to be a snake, but, I think, more, that I should be a fortitude, a simile of something that is flowing free, an advocate of life. You certainly are an advocate for life yourself Bob. Loved this! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful write, Bob!!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is permeated with deep awareness and peace. Beautifully envelopping. Insightful and captivating write, dear Bob. Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I think, more, that I should be a fortitude, a simile of something that is flowing free, an advocate of life." Wind away! Write away! ~ and keep those mellifluous words flowing!  Love & Light Houses, Linda |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Lighthousebob - I agree, a most beautiful writing... BC |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Very nice, Bob. A great meander through life, with good humour, and, on this forum, good company. Well written, sir. Sutra 25: Remember that a pile of ordure is simply that: Seek not to give it meaning. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I like this meander, Bob. Alison |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
OMG! What a Surprise!!! So many kind and generous replies!!! Thank you! Thank you! and Thank you to All!!! Thank you! I'm so very, very happy that you all seemed to enjoy my little Meanderthal. Again, thank you and God bless, -Bob |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love this place that your poem took me too. There is much beauty in your metaphors and similes. You are quite talented and I thank you for sharing your wise and wonderful gifts. So nice, LB~~ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Why, thank you, BluesSerenade Poetess Gal by the Seaside, Thank You, so very, very much and, Geeeeeeze, sorry, but, hummmmmmm, that I might reply to your much too kind and generous commendations, well, to tell you the truth, I’m a bit lost for words. Anyways, God bless, Big Smiles, Big Blushes, and many, many Thanks! -Bob |
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