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Now I can hear |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
My face is covered in mud I wear no shoes I crawl in misery My home is gone I have no soul My love is history You love me Yes you do, I see it in your eyes You love me I see your soul and cry Don't you Understand why, Understand how I live, my life Or if I must, I'll move the mountains to spell it out to, You, Let it burn, Let it crumble, Let it tumble, Let it fall, The world around me, let it all go. I remember the pain, remember the tear drops on my skin I remember the reason this whole thing began And, I love you. Yes, I do, you can see it in my eyes. Yes I love you, My soul screams out and cries! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
Violent with emotion! I felt your turmoil in this one! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Zach, you've succeeded in describing intense emotion and passion. Well done. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
pretty cool setup for this one. I enjoyed it lots and lots. I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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