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AncientHippie
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Surfing the Cosmic Flow

0 posted 2009-10-24 09:59 PM




A kaleidoscope of colour and sound:
here, a grove of bamboo poles
waving strips of bright cloth
call for the blessing of revered
and ancient Gods
on an East Indian wedding...
there, the explosion of Stabroek Market
scatters vendors' stalls across
the old Dutch square.

Papaws and mangoes vie
with books, tee-shirts,
music tapes and CDs:
the sound of Bollywood
competes culturally with
urgent soca and hip-hop
as stall-owners musically mark
their ethnic roots.

Beyond the Clock Tower
the Demerara flows in muddy splendour
patiently supporting
motley bum-boats, freighters,
fishing boats, and
the occasional Amerindian dugout.
The ghosts of the Jonestown dead
wander here, betrayed
by their leader's selfish view
of Heaven.

Miles away, up the brooding Berbice River,
several hours walk from the nearest village,
a little black woman,
now past seventy,
tends her neat garden
of borabean, squash,
bokchoy, mango, fiery bird pepper,
banana, papaw, and avocado.
Long ago, as a valued friend
and domestic,
she travelled with her "Mistuh" and "Mistress"
to live in Trinidad and Delhi,
and to visit the islands
of Tobago, and far-off Phuket.
In her sparse hut mementoes:-
fabrics, carvings, batiks,
knick-knacks haggled over,
and hard won by this frugal lady,
in the bright markets of Sarojini,
Dilihut, Khan, Yashwant,
and the packed streets of Patong.
Her photo album has pride of place,
and she smiles as she sees, once again,
her two blue-eyed Northern children,
remembering diapers, laughter,
bruises, and fairy tales:-
kisses, and
"Good night, Venus.
We love you."

The distances are great,
but the memories
are as close
as our hearts.

Sutra 22: Anger directed at you is not necessarily about you: always consider the Source.
Jim's Guide to Enlightenment:  The Complete Sutras

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GBride
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since 2009-07-02
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1 posted 2009-10-25 08:17 AM


Ah, stories of distent lands and exotic people, just the thing while I sit here on Sunday morrning drinking coffee listening to Mozart.
And what a tale you tell.
A verbal Natonal Geographic.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2009-10-25 02:34 PM


"A verbal Natonal Geographic" Jim, ditto that!!~L
AncientHippie
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3 posted 2009-10-26 08:23 AM


Lori and GBride:  I consider myself so very fortunate to have had the opportunity to travel and live in the countries of which I write.  If I could live my life again, I would not change any of it.

Best regards,
Jim

Sutra 25: Remember that a pile of ordure is simply that: Seek not to give it meaning.
Jim's Guide to Enlightenment:  The Complete Sutras

shalisadefa
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since 2009-08-13
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4 posted 2009-10-26 04:38 PM


I see that you have engraved the memories of Guyana not only in your mind, but in your heart and your soul as well!

I see that you even mention Jonestown.
Yes challenging times...Guyana in the 70ies and 80ies!

With every word you describe
it's Guyana I envisualize

(I have never been there btw although it's next door)



AncientHippie
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5 posted 2009-10-27 08:58 AM


shalisadefa:  Thank you for your kind comments.  I spent the years 1986 to 1989 in Georgetown.  My only son was born there.  It was (and is) a fascinating country with so much potential, but so much inequality and strife!  Good memories and good friends.  I think you would find it similar to Surinam, but perhaps a little less civilised.
Jim

Sutra 30: Language reflects the Truth of one’s Reality: listen carefully when others speak.
Jim's Guide to Enlightenment

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