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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
DayQuill NightQuill Say Quill Write women these women are one in the same fragmented illusions that left reason dead on the floor emotional promotional actions elusive words pervade and disappear all the same reason writing different names logic truth tongue and cheek emotional protection leaves an ill effect never left longing... for their affect (women, gotta love 'em)  [This message has been edited by martiniat8 (11-08-2009 08:04 PM).] |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
I don't really understand your poem. But then again sometimes I have to be hit over the head to get it. Yes, I'm the guy that just doesn't get it. I like your poem even though I don't get it. |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
thats the point, I don't get them either, just fragments of different things that sometimes just dont make sense, but in the end, got to love 'em |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hmmm, the same goes for men! lol But I still love them!  Thanks for sharing the 'guy perspective'! As they say, "Women are from Venus and man are from Mars"! ~ and vivre la difference! lol Love 'n a hug, A Woman |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Mystery, dear Brad, is one of the main ingredients of women's potions of charms! Enjoy the path that leads to the unraveling! Good job! Love, Margherita |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Maybe I was generalizing too much, I am actually referencing 3 different women in this one. But yeah a mystery to be sure and why I love 'em or at least drawn to them. Beyond all logic, men convey facts, women convey emotion for the most part. Now that I look at this, I could write an essay on this piece, just on the literalisms and metaphors used in just the 1st 3 lines :P needless to say I was referencing not only the cold medicene I was under the influence of at the moment, trying to clear my head and telling myself to write and that's all what came out |
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