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Delicate Thing
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Delicate Thing |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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He is my trellis And I the vine A delicate thing At the mercy of the wind Dancing flaming petals incessantly And should I lose him My fate to befall The accursed earth A blooming briar Twisted in pain Beauty Overgrown With Grief (devil's tower) series [This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (10-23-2009 01:50 PM).] |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
I have saved this one to my personal disk. Wow, what a great poem. It should be in every child's literature book. What a talent you have! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms lg..a fine prospective for a woman to have..watching herself in bloom |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
GBride Thank you so much for your amazing vote of confidence in this piece of work-you literally hatched my goose egg. I was afraid every one was reading it as goose poo! Bless your heart and thanks again. ~L |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
D thanks for stopping to admire my roses~L |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice....James |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
What a beautiful way to describe your relationship! Your writing is fantastic and that's the truth... Louise Ryan aka Bridget Shenachie |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
Oh. My. Goodness. The first four lines blew my mind. I absolutely loved this beautiful piece of art! Aenea If I don't say it...who will? |
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