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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
While The sound of our heart While my heart skips a bet Hearing a heartbeat Makes me woder While I am wonderig Wondering for your love Wait awhile While I am waiting for your love While you come back to me I should realize the time While I wait For you to come back While I sit back and relax Watch the sunset During the time Let now To say goodbye Let me take my love While I realize it's time To learn for me to wait While..... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, the yearnging ~ and the waiting. But as they say, "What is worth having, is worth waiting for."  ~ May you not have to wait long.  Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I can just see you watching the sunset and humming your love tune filled with infinite longing. Beautiful, dear Vandana. Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A soft tender love song, Vandana. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
So nice, vandana. A |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Vandana, very nice poem, I think girls make boys waiting for learning them to think...There is always a lesson in everything... have a nice day yann |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
I agree with Yann. Always lovely to read a woman with such skill. |
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