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vandana
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0 posted 2009-10-23 11:43 AM




While
The sound of our heart
While my heart skips a bet
Hearing a heartbeat
Makes me woder
While I am wonderig
Wondering for your love
Wait awhile
While I am waiting for your love
While you come back to me
I should realize the time
While I wait
For you to come back
While I sit back and relax
Watch the sunset
During the time
Let now
To say goodbye
Let me take my love
While I realize it's time
To learn for me to wait
While.....

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2009-10-23 12:29 PM


Oh, the yearnging ~ and the waiting. But as they say, "What is worth having, is worth waiting for."

~ May you not have to wait long.


Linda

Margherita
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2 posted 2009-10-24 05:20 AM


I can just see you watching the sunset and humming your love tune filled with infinite longing.

Beautiful, dear Vandana.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2009-10-26 07:20 PM


Nice...James
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4 posted 2009-10-26 08:59 PM


A soft tender love song, Vandana.
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5 posted 2009-10-27 01:23 AM


So nice, vandana.

A

2islander2
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6 posted 2009-10-27 04:43 AM


Hello Vandana, very nice poem, I think girls make boys waiting for learning them to think...There is always a lesson in everything...

have a nice day

yann

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7 posted 2009-10-27 05:34 AM


I agree with Yann. Always lovely to read a woman with such skill.
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