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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2009-10-22 11:33 PM

In amber reflections
is told a tale;

his tale
of life shaded in shadows,
haunts of past
still hold him there
yet love of life
is so alive

when windows to the soul
twinkle ever so slightly.
I hear the song;

his song

I feel the calm,
in voice so strong;
and I savor every word
clinging to the light
that comes shining through
and I;

I listen in the silence
to this melody
of such beauty
and tragedy,
knowing each second
is oh so sweet...

Dear gentle of man
return soon to me
so that I can hear again
the rhapsody
when your eyes speak
in hues of youth,
aged with wisdom
and learned of new..

Come speak again, softly
from eyes of truth
whisper softly

oh tell me,

the story of you.

{revised 10-22-09}

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

1 posted 2009-10-23 12:00 PM

Wow, I feel this!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2009-10-23 06:19 AM

Beautifully expressed, Donna~~

So nice to read you again.

M

AncientHippie
Member

since 2009-10-15

Posts 411
Surfing the Cosmic Flow

3 posted 2009-10-23 08:56 AM

GS: What a beautifully crafted cry from the soul. I sense present love but future sadness strongly in this work of the heart.
Thank you.
Jim

Sutra 15: One’s Dharma may be obscured by believing in Its exclusivity.
Jim's Guide to Enlightenment: The Complete Sutras

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2009-10-23 10:37 AM

Gentle Spirit - nice to see you again. Great write, and enjoyed reading it...

BC

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2009-10-23 10:45 AM

A gentle pleading heartwrite.
Good to read you again!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2009-10-23 11:40 AM

good read

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2009-10-23 11:50 AM

ms gs..it is always a pleasure to watch your pen dance

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

8 posted 2009-10-23 12:31 PM

Beautifully bittersweet Gentle Spirit,thank you~L

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2009-10-23 12:39 PM

Donna, your pen is as gentle as ever. I whisper your poems as I read them. They are filled with grace, beauty, and palapable emotion.

A pleasant surprise to find this offering from you! It's been a while! Too long a while, for my liking!

Linda

threadbear
Senior Member

since 2008-07-10

Posts 817
Indy

10 posted 2009-10-23 01:12 PM

Like a wonderful life-soundtrack
you've scored this beautifully, Donna.

Jeff (B.P.) from KAL

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2009-10-26 10:54 AM

Dear gentle of man
return soon to me
so that I can hear again
the rhapsody
when your eyes speak
in hues of youth,
aged with wisdom
and learned of new..

You write such gentle beauty... every word is exquisite! *S*

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