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of night dancing |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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rincon was still there again this morning curled on her side with her back to the sand perhaps sleeping lightly or just pretending that she didn't know the sound of my leather when my heart makes my arm reach to wave I could see her outline against moon windows the curve of her tides and sculpt of her waves and then the sounds of her breathing like a lover ocean kissing smooth stones rhythmic as seduction is to the finger tips I know she will see my boot prints at her hem when she brings the dawn in to place it on hangers and acts playfully surprised that she was not alone but had her predictable voyeur as her guardian sky like she knew she would each and every evening as she dons her gauzy gown and night dances ___________ daark (do of sand) |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ooh la laa..smooth as silk Mr Daark... enjoyed it so much. Bisous de Paris RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
R/B ms, thanks lady. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Okay, waltz in with the beauty of your poetry and seduce my imagination - sheese, I think I need to ban your words from early morning readings. You make me want to go back to bed. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, I am sorry the words make you sleepy..*grin* thanks babe |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
soft boot sounds travel to bathyal depths, where sirens awaken and smile. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms indi. There are sirens there often when the waves are too large and they swallow unsuspecting surfers. Thanks lady!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."acts playfully surprised that she was not alone but had her predictable voyeur as her guardian sky like she knew she would each and every evening as she dons her gauzy gown and night dances" ~ I completely understand this... Sensuously scribed, Stranger.  Linda |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms linda..thank you so much lady friend! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How comes I missed this gorgeous sparkling gem of a poem?  It is such an intense pleasure to get lost in your words. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Dreamy D~L |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
D, she dances so beautifully under your gaze. She is lovely, as are your gifts of words to her. These writes have always been some of my favorite of yours. (I said, some.  )Enjoyed it babe. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your words resonate in the night sky, around her curves, and with every wave that breaks there is that rush!!! But you know D~, it is the tides that change and remain the same...always~~~ that leaves a beauty mark on your coastal poetry. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar..thanks lady friend ___________ ms LG, thank you for the eyes ms __________ ms GS, thanks babe for your touch ____________ ms bluezy..you always have my glances on your seasides, thanks babe |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Whoa, DS, another magical mystery tour of moonlight, beauty, leather, and departure. Finely crafted and poignant piece, with some very memorable lines. Thank you, Stranger. Jim Sutra 25: Remember that a pile of ordure is simply that: Seek not to give it meaning. |
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