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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Prowling the midnight river Nosing the air Belly growling for goddess. In the heavy mist (devil's tower) series |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Lori, this wonderfully brief slice of foreboding leaves me pleading for more. Ominous and compelling. My thanks. Jim Sutra 15: One’s Dharma may be obscured by believing in Its exclusivity. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jim- I think there is a Gazelle down river I will be keeping an eye on~L |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms LG..and does he pre-date her? or was she always there praying to be preyed to. kewl music in this series ms |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
D-She is timeless and what goddess wouldn't want prayed upon?~L |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I will be sure to not go near the river at midnight!  Seriously speaking, you conjured up a compelling poem with an economy of words. Well done!  EA |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Earth Angel-Thankyou for your most generous compliment! ~L |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Wow! What an image! You penned it well. Enjoyed the poem and the comments... Shenachie |
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