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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-10-21 07:02 AM



    

an eye high of amber dawn
and a sip of whiskey
to sooth the soul
before decending there
into someone else's heaven

___________

daark (swallows) art by DS

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (10-21-2009 08:32 AM).]

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suthern
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1 posted 2009-10-21 08:49 AM


ethereal excellence!!
AncientHippie
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2 posted 2009-10-21 09:00 AM


Great marriage of two art forms, DS.  I love the photo, and the perfection (and truth) of the poem.  Been there, done that, and will never forget it!  Thank you.

Sutra 6: If your Path seems to be sprinkled with shards of glass, you should examine each shard to ensure it is not a diamond.

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2009-10-21 09:49 AM


Ms Suthern. Thanks lady.

______________


AH thanks guy. I look at the other side of her eyes now, the setting of her as she goes out each evening.  

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2009-10-21 11:31 AM


D-Beautiful images~L
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2009-10-21 11:47 AM


ms LG, thanks lady friend
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6 posted 2009-10-23 06:19 PM


Incredibly spectacular! Picture and words emit a unic sound of deep emotion that will linger for a long moment ...

It's a gift to be able to view your art along with your extraordinary poetic talent, dear D.!

Love,
Margherita

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7 posted 2009-10-23 10:54 PM


I like where you are going.  This is stunning and so well written.

A

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2009-10-24 06:54 AM


ms mar, thanks my friend


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ms ali-san, thank you little one

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9 posted 2009-10-27 12:26 PM


I had to come back and just read and gaze at the picture one more time.  

Ali-san

martiniat8
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10 posted 2009-10-27 12:34 PM


WOW, what a picture! Like the parting of the Red Sea
Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2009-10-27 07:22 AM


ms ali-san, thanks babe..I did it with my xacto knife..blade got a bit hot though

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martinia8, thanks amigo

Bridget Shenachie
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12 posted 2009-10-29 05:34 PM


Love the picture of the amber liquid. It warms the tummy as it soothes the soul. Your photography is improving the perfection of your poems.

Shenachie

Dreamer05
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13 posted 2009-10-29 05:45 PM


Love the pic! And the first line is the absolute best.


~Dreamer05~

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