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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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searching for a sight of myself without sadness where the madness isn’t inches from taking me by tears raking me over and over my failures and fears grasping at straws and silver linings I cling to the clouds falling down on double edged swords broken and bleeding looking for my goddess like a lost set of keys [This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (10-21-2009 11:46 AM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I feel as though you've written me... or at least... the me of the moment. *S* Straight to the heart... and into my library. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
*S* and yours to mine~L |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Heavy piece, Lori. The phrase "looking for my goddess like a lost set of keys" is brilliant. I do so hope that this poem is an emotional exploration, and not based upon yourself. The Lori I see in your poetry is in complete and constant communication with her goddess within. Nicely done. Jim Sutra 5: Public self-criticism does not brighten one’s Spark of Brahman: it merely feeds one’s narcissism. |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
searching for a sight of myself without sadness without tears too i wish you to laugh always my dear freind Thank you for your writing love nourzihane |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jim-My goddess has issues, some days are dark and she isn't as clear for me to see. The contrast adds depth, (I think ) |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
nourzihane I laugh till I cry and cry till I laugh-it's all good. thanks for your warm wishes~L |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I really like this poem because it just reached into me as I read it. Thank you. Alison |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lg..sometimes I just toss my keys into the dumpster and give em a day or so to see if they come back in the belly of a cat...thus no locks on my doors and no key needed to fire up the bone shaker..enjoyed your art here |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Alison It is good to know when my work touches people and yet I feel I push on bruises and buttons that conjure pain, doing little to console.~L |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Ds-I am humbled by your use of the word "art", thank you for your most generouos eyes~L |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Ds-I am humbled by your use of the word "art", thank you for your most generouos eyes~L |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
vandana Thank you, glad you enjoyed it~L |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
There was a line in the film "Shadowlands" about the life of C.S. Lewis and I quote..."I read to know that I am not alone." Your poems elicit such visceral responses. That is talent my friend. Shenachie |
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