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comma gauzy in copper
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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she was more of a tennis shoe ballerina used windows more than stages said it was warmer behind them then being in front of them she said she sucked at some things and didn't when she should sometimes was just a bit picky about what she ate and didn't like fast food that wouldn't be there in the morning a hundred years from now well a least a week or so long enough to make a memory with a man that just liked her more then all of that dog stuck love stuff that makes the heart have holes and the belly have marks and did I like kissing better than kisses ______________ daark (highway series) |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
I don't know, DS...you are certainly unique. I can't understand how the title relates to the subject, but I can see it is perfect! Your work here is a stream of consciousness abstract that takes everyday and makes it a thing of rare beauty. My hat is off to you. Sutra 4: Do not expect your Path to be smooth. It will have rocks, slippery portions, and parts that are washed away completely. Persevere. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
AH thanks amigo..comma (pause) gauzy kind of mist filled view, copper, the color of the sunset that seems to paint everything pearl amberish.. thus the setting to meet the vixen in my mind again.. sometimes I set the tone or stage to introduce..might be the prozac, potassium nitrate and viagra combination I use to improve my ice curling skills? (grin) |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Waving your enigmatic wand again D, so which do you like better- kissing or kissed?~L |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
Very nice. I'll seek your stuff out often. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms LG...the ones that melt against the lips...slowly...thanks ms _____________ YB, thanks for the eyes |
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