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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Behold the Prism That I am Choose your color In my vision Do not be distracted By rainbows I have thrown My light Is only refracted It is not My own [This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (10-16-2009 06:04 PM).] |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Wow, Lori. What a profound and insightful little piece. Very clever. Much enjoyed. Thank you so much. Sutra 93: Do not speak to me of Reality: it is a personal concept that varies with the Observer. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks AH! Nice to find a home here where people "get it" Bless your heart!~L |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
*clapping* Wow, I am really enjoying your gift. Have tasted this one a few times already. Heather |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Wow, I am happy to see a talented new poet posting on the blue pages. Welcome Lori Ida |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Ida-I'm glad you liked it and I am humbled by your use of the word talented. I'm still getting used to thinking of myself as a writer. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
H-thanks for keeping an eye on me. I hope all my dabbling you will find as palatable~L |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very well done, my friend...says good things about your soul... j. |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Quite the interesting poem. I rather enjoyed it. Arana Darkwolf |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
jwesley Bless your listening heart. It (the poem) says everything about my soul, kinda me in a nut shell. Thank you (more than you know)~L |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Arana Darkwolf thank you for looking in on me I hope you will find more of my work to your liking.~L |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
What a profound poem--a new way of thinking about holiness as being God in us. Forgive me for paraphrasing my understanding of what you said so beautifully... Shenachie |
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