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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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 and after the rains have ended their saliva she returns to me as a lover of my sins her second hand virginity is nearly new again and she sighs her highway hounding habitual as a ritual she does in vulgar temptation when she brings the mist of midnight along and whispers to my demons of our threesomes that only would begin with my entering them but would go on for hours after without me unless I was faster with my fists and throttle and willing to let them use my face in vain to sting the middle of their mending blends so I speak in silence as they abuse my thunder ______________ daark (highway series) |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
on metal horseback, more than rock or storm, he is cherry petals too. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi.. without the pedals or was it petals you said nude vased hovering |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
to sting the middle of their mending blends GREAT line! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
humble thanks martiniat8 I appreciate your review |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"her second hand virginity is nearly new again" ...no disappointment in finding creativity here (as if I expected to be disappointed...not) an "exercising the mind" write...or, is that "exorcising the mind?" |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Ds ...as a ritual she does in vulgar temptation when she brings the mist of midnight along and whispers to my demons.... I found that part especially intriguing and as always a great read.~L |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
steavenr, thanks amigo!! ___________ ms lg, thank you for looking in this window ms |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Sometimes I have to read your work a few times before I can truly understand it. That's a good thing, a compliment. The lines are deep and profound. |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Dark Stranger - Perhaps there is a balance that says when we rejoice that thornbushes have roses, we must also acknowledge that rose bushes have thorns. Like your deep work here Dark Stranger. Namyh |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms K...thanks lady...have missed your eyes __________ namyh, thank you for the review..yes you are on track perfectly |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
I'm so jealous of the bike in the pic. The poem was a nice write. Arana Darkwolf |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms berger..thanks lady!! |
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