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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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0 posted 2009-10-14 03:06 PM


Shining moon, above the stars.
Below the stars.
Endless swoon.

You don't know.
How pretty you are.
With the galaxy so far away.
I can see in your eyes.

Read my lips
I'll tell you a secret
If we hold hands
We might just keep it

At this moment
At this time
At this shred of happiness

Maybe it'll rain
But it wouldn't be bad
We could dance
To keep this beautiful romance

Or I could wake up.

That works too.

© Copyright 2009 Zachariah Gavia-Peyton - All Rights Reserved
brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
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nowhere and everywhere
1 posted 2009-10-14 03:23 PM



what a dream  

this just made me smile

'beautifully captured' poet  


suthern
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since 1999-07-29
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2 posted 2009-10-14 03:44 PM


Ohhhhhh... I like this very much! *S*
hafrock
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 34
India
3 posted 2009-10-14 03:48 PM


A dream better than true..b.e.a.u.tiful
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