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The Coaster Poem
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The Coaster Poem |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
The Jazz Man Martini @ hand Listens Soothes, The Seethe with an old brass band and Bible Singing songs of Sandy days Rumple Ravel tap the Ragtime lifts from broken piano hands Tiny fingers scared and burned Polka dots play on Ivory a Moonlight Serenade |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
"Writing, Singing, Dancing, Photography, Travel, Swimming"; your interests are interesting.Sounds like a happy person when put all together. I like your style. latearrival |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
such a vivid and musical expression. thanks for the poem. yann |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
with an old brass band and Bible _____________ I enjoyed this little scene bradley  |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
i think I'm working all this into this chain short story poem... stay tuned  |
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dragngrl28 Junior Member
since 2009-10-12
Posts 45Texas, USA |
The poem makes me want to know more about the environment. Is is a seedy place full of smoke or a more upscale joint? Enjoyed reading. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Boy you hit every note!! Love the nostalgia and your vivid visuals. Neat poem!! |
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shalisadefa Member
since 2009-08-13
Posts 114 |
You make me long for long gone yesteryears, a period I wasn't even born yet. I'm on the set of an old movie. Well done |
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