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viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-10-14 02:19 AM



Money's tight, but we get by.
There's no lack of love in our room.
we eat alright, drink a little beer from time to time.
We wrestle on my mattress some mornings,
before I go to work.
We never pass judgement,
and we've never cheated.

Sometimes we go for drives,
just for the sake of driving.
We both love the jeep,
and the wind in our face.
The cold, it doesn't bother us any.

Me and my dog.

_____________________________________
Paul

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

© Copyright 2009 Paul Weisbrod - All Rights Reserved
brneyedgrly
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1 posted 2009-10-14 02:28 PM



this is wonderful  


shalisadefa
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2 posted 2009-10-14 03:53 PM


How sweet!

'must love dogs' lol


viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
3 posted 2009-10-14 04:57 PM


yeah me and stinky man get along just fine.


His real name is Legend, but I call him stinky man unless I'm mad at him. He'll be two in november.  

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

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4 posted 2009-10-16 02:59 PM


Happy early birthday to stinky man... he sounds like a wonderful friend! *S*
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5 posted 2009-10-18 02:23 AM


This is my life.  Stuart and Abby-xyz send their regards to Stinky Man.

I love this one, Paul.

Alison

2islander2
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6 posted 2009-10-18 03:45 AM


Hi Viking,I like that very much, you personalized your dog with talent, making it clear at the last verse, thanks for the surprising and touching poem.

yann

viking_metal
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7 posted 2009-10-18 02:30 PM


S... Thanks. Me and stinky man send our thanks.

Alaboo, me lovely, We say hello


islander, thanks a lot, yo. I am glad you enjoyed it.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

Kaoru
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8 posted 2009-10-21 02:31 PM


That's it, I need a dog.
viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
9 posted 2009-10-21 02:56 PM


Everybody needs a dog.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

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