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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2009-10-13 01:19 PM


My Friend's Date (con't)

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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2009-10-13 01:23 PM


hello Bill, I appreciate very much the purpose of the poem and the way you directly intervene and talks to the reader, I will follow that up.

regards

yann

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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2 posted 2009-10-13 02:02 PM


Bill, you tease!  Making us wait! I can tell it's going to be a real good time.
love it.

martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
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Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
3 posted 2009-10-13 02:15 PM


Lol reminds me of my days in the Blue Ridge Mountains
Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana
4 posted 2009-10-13 03:50 PM


I hope it's not a Deliverance type ending. lol
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2009-10-14 06:51 AM


able to catch up a  bit this morning
very  funny so far~~

M

brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere
6 posted 2009-10-14 02:30 PM



the picture of these guys shootin is hilarious bc..

can't wait for the next part




shalisadefa
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since 2009-08-13
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7 posted 2009-10-15 04:07 PM


After reading the reaction of Chalmette Guy I laughed so loud; my thoughts exactly!

Keep on writing .. I'm a follower


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