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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2009-10-13 12:39 PM



Dark Stranger

He came out of nowhere
With his quick chrome tongue
Teasing
Tantalizing
Tearing
Up the road
Burning out
Broken hearts

[This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (10-15-2009 08:57 AM).]

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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2009-10-13 01:03 PM


ms LG...sounds like you have been talking to those who never knew him...but then that is why they never will..I enjoyed this shot of your pen whiskey

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2009-10-13 02:09 PM


"Who was that Dark Stranger?" I asked
"Jack Dan." was all they said.

Chalmette Guy
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3 posted 2009-10-13 03:31 PM


lol

enjoyed this... and the replies.

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2009-10-13 03:41 PM


Lori - who was that masked man, that 'Dark Stranger' I wonder...

BC

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5 posted 2009-10-15 12:47 PM


Excellent.

A

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2009-10-15 08:59 AM


Excellent?! you are generous in you praise I am humbled ~L
Bridget Shenachie
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7 posted 2009-10-28 09:47 PM


Ah--the world fills with Dark Strangers--and life becomes even more fascinating--

Enigmatic write!

Shenachie

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