Open Poetry #45 |
growing pains |
brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
I shake free shedding leaves branches bared I have what I need I must go surrounding evergreen will shelter long winter I will proceed It is so northern winds and ice on the prairie will falter in Spring hope will thrive on bitter vine bursting new seed this I know and I will celebrate that season’s gathering and welcome the simple adornment of new leaves alone. . |
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shalisadefa Member
since 2009-08-13
Posts 114 |
I can almost feel the challenge and excitement of the journey to come. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
brneyedgrly - your heart is speaking once again with its thoughts... BC |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
You go girl! You can do it. I know! We are survivors. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms browneyes...they say a tree must know the seasons to grow majestic..enjoyed this |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
thanks so much for your comments I appreciate them |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Shellie sometimes "alone" is not such a bad thing. It lets you get to know yourself better. M |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
just and beautifully poetic, I like the subject, the observation of the poet and the choice of the words. Thanks for the poem. yann |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
maureen thanks..good to see you stop in ________ yann thanks for your kind words on my poem |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
hope will thrive on bitter vine bursting new seed this I know We can't prevent our past from defining us... we can only control to what extent it does... and this is a beautiful march forward! *S* |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
thanks suthern |
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