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rachaelfuchsberger
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0 posted 2009-10-10 02:30 PM


I'm so scared for you and I
I'm not ready for good bye
We have been together long
Losing you would feel so wrong

I am scared that it is true
They will tell us that it grew
It's so hard to just stay strong
Losing you would feel so wrong

Maybe it will be benign
And my fear is misaligned
I am Trying to be strong
Losing you would feel so wrong

Arana Darkwolf

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priyanka
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1 posted 2009-10-10 04:22 PM


"Losing you would feel so wrong"
How true !

The feeling just eats at the heart...
You put it well...
Nice write

rachaelfuchsberger
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2 posted 2009-10-10 10:15 PM


Thank you. This poem comes from the fear that I've been experiencing because we're awaiting the results of my girlfriend's needle biopsy to find out if she has breast cancer. I don't know what I would do if I lost her.

Arana Darkwolf

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3 posted 2009-10-11 04:20 AM


Hello Rachael, your words touch me, I wish love will vinquish and happy ending. Thanks for the poem.

yann

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4 posted 2009-10-11 10:08 AM


The fear of losing always sends up shivers in my spine..Don't worry..she'l be alright
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5 posted 2009-10-11 12:35 PM


Thank you both for your support. We may have results as early as tomorrow, but as late as next week. Waiting is turning out to be the hardest part.

Arana Darkwolf

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6 posted 2009-10-12 10:57 AM


Understanding your poem... and wishing you and your partner the very best of news!!
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7 posted 2009-10-12 01:20 PM


This is a lovely poem Rachel ... I'm so sorry for the testing requirements, and I hope all will be well when the results come in.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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8 posted 2009-10-12 04:56 PM


rachaelfuchsberger - sending you a prayer that all will be ok... Stay positive...

BC

rachaelfuchsberger
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9 posted 2009-10-12 06:08 PM


Thank you all for your support. We still haven't heard from the doctor but we will be seeing him on Thursday, so if there's no news by then, we'll ask him about it.

Arana Darkwolf

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10 posted 2009-10-12 10:17 PM



add my prayers and best wishes too



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11 posted 2009-10-14 06:23 PM


Thank you

Arana Darkwolf

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