Open Poetry #45 |
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Losing You Would Just Feel Wrong (Kyrielle PW) |
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rachaelfuchsberger![]()
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
I'm so scared for you and I I'm not ready for good bye We have been together long Losing you would feel so wrong I am scared that it is true They will tell us that it grew It's so hard to just stay strong Losing you would feel so wrong Maybe it will be benign And my fear is misaligned I am Trying to be strong Losing you would feel so wrong Arana Darkwolf |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
"Losing you would feel so wrong" How true ! The feeling just eats at the heart... You put it well... Nice write ![]() |
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rachaelfuchsberger![]()
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Thank you. This poem comes from the fear that I've been experiencing because we're awaiting the results of my girlfriend's needle biopsy to find out if she has breast cancer. I don't know what I would do if I lost her. Arana Darkwolf |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Rachael, your words touch me, I wish love will vinquish and happy ending. Thanks for the poem. yann |
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hafrock Junior Member
since 2009-10-10
Posts 34India |
The fear of losing always sends up shivers in my spine..Don't worry..she'l be alright |
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rachaelfuchsberger![]()
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Thank you both for your support. We may have results as early as tomorrow, but as late as next week. Waiting is turning out to be the hardest part. Arana Darkwolf |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Understanding your poem... and wishing you and your partner the very best of news!! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is a lovely poem Rachel ... I'm so sorry for the testing requirements, and I hope all will be well when the results come in. ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
rachaelfuchsberger - sending you a prayer that all will be ok... Stay positive... BC |
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rachaelfuchsberger![]()
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Thank you all for your support. We still haven't heard from the doctor but we will be seeing him on Thursday, so if there's no news by then, we'll ask him about it. Arana Darkwolf |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
add my prayers and best wishes too ![]() |
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rachaelfuchsberger![]()
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Thank you Arana Darkwolf |
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