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Miss Anshul
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Miss Anshul |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
Hand in hand they walked ahead "Listen my dear" was what she said "Don't just walk, we'll have fun instead" "Why don't we just run to the stead?" She tugged at his hand and gave a big smile "Oh! Why don't you speak just once in a while?" "Speak to me, Don't be so vile" She dragged him along for a mile He fell into her hands Now she felt bad, He just couldn't stand Poor Miss Anshul was all sad "Don't fear my love" "I'm just here, near" "I'll take care of you" "I'll carry you poor dear" So she carried him all the way Miss Anshul so hard she tried to look all gay When passers by looked at her perplexed "Oh! Its nothing, I like carrying him". Vexed they left her to her chore They couldn't bear to see any more Her misery at their heart it tore The "him" she talked to was a teddy bear from the store. |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
Lovely my dear. I don't think it can be done any better. It is perfect just the way it is!!! |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
At last someone read it... Thank you so much!!  I'm glad you liked it... |
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hafrock Junior Member
since 2009-10-10
Posts 34India |
Nicely crafted one..k.i.u |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
Thank you hafrock... glad you liked it |
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