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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
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New Orleans

0 posted 2009-10-09 03:51 AM


She knows they all stare

Talk to her they wouldn't dare

She seduces them all the same

With the beat, it drives them insane

Its game, a fun one at that

Dancing

Romancing

Speaking with her actions

Everybody knows the pretty girls jewel of the show

All the guys just want her smile at 'em

So confident in her ability

So arrogant in her tranquility

Who would have known her self esteem was low

Never having someone who'd ask her whats on her mind

Without thinking

Of eating the forbidden fruit

Of Eden.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde

© Copyright 2009 Zachariah Gavia-Peyton - All Rights Reserved
martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
1 posted 2009-10-09 03:56 AM


girls like that...

their forbidden fruit is
their mind

anniepimm54
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since 2009-09-03
Posts 110

2 posted 2009-10-09 07:55 AM


Excellent write, a woman's mind is indeed a strange thing to work out even for us women
priyanka
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since 2009-06-15
Posts 216
india
3 posted 2009-10-09 12:03 PM


Yes yes!! I agree!
Strange indeed...
We really do not know!!

Terrific write

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