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Open Poetry #45

Maybe

N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
Member

since 2009-07-30

Posts 360
New Orleans

0 posted 2009-10-09 03:44 AM

Maybe its the air tonight

Maybe its the way you smile

Maybe its the moon light

Maybe its the sweet music swirling around

And around

All I see is you

All I need is you

Same old song sung a new

My heart beats a rhythm

Of a broken record

Let it go around

And around

The way your skirt sways

The way your hips move

The way your eyes twinkle in the star light

Maybe its drinks

Maybe its your voice

Maybe its my mind playing tricks

All I know

Is I

Will never live it down

Never be the one to catch your eye

Never be the one to skip your heart

Maybe its the way its meant to be

Heaven is too special

Hell is calling

And

All I know is your stealing my soul

Tonight.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

1 posted 2009-10-09 03:51 AM

the heart is a strange animal.
I've been going through the same feelings, in the first half of the poem...
What it is that makes us fall in love.

You never know what the future may bring

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2009-10-09 10:58 AM

I like this very much... especially the ending lines! *S* Whatever it is... we're almost compelled to answer. *S*

priyanka
Member

since 2009-06-15

Posts 216
india

3 posted 2009-10-09 12:00 PM

love-such a compelling feeling
"smiles"
such a beautiful poem...

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