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Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2009-10-09 01:13 AM


inexplicable blues shadow me tonight
drawing me deeper into a place
where I normally don’t go
so I just sit quietly and read

enjoying the parade of words
that march across the page of my book
like a muted marching band
stepping in perfect synchronization

I applaud their achievements
and remain silent in appreciation
of their orchestrated movement
as I share in the joy of expression

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Alison

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1 posted 2009-10-09 03:02 AM


I think you are handling the blues very well indeed, Alison.
                               Ida

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2 posted 2009-10-09 03:37 AM


hello Alison, I love the expression of the poem, the sympathy around books and the atmosphere of knowledge about the world when aa person plunges itself in books, your poem is so well crafted and give deep thoughts to the reader.

thanks

yann

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3 posted 2009-10-09 07:03 AM


sometimes I read the ingredients on items in the cupboard...not as much drama as a good book, but I always know how it will end..
Chalmette Guy
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4 posted 2009-10-09 09:03 AM


I am enjoying a sip with you Ali.
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5 posted 2009-10-09 11:02 AM


like a muted marching band
stepping in perfect synchronization

Such a beautiful write of melancholy... Is there enough in that cup to share a sip? *S*

Rick
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6 posted 2009-10-09 06:22 PM


Dear Alison, I hope you are not too sad my friend, I am glad you can find comfort in a good book which takes you to another place for a while. Enjoyed the poem, miss your photo though. Take care and try to laugh at life hey.

Rick

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7 posted 2009-10-10 03:01 AM


Wonderful sip of the blues
Oklahoma Rose
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8 posted 2009-10-11 10:27 PM


I know what you mean. I sometimes am overcome with the blues. Not a very good place to be.
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9 posted 2009-10-11 10:44 PM


LOVE this!!!
Alison
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10 posted 2009-10-15 12:38 PM


Ida,

Thank you.  I get over them fast.  Sometimes the blues are like are like a rainy day - the view is cloudy and the best thing is to settle in with a good book until the storm blows over.

xoxoxo
A

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yann,

Thank you.  I love your responses as much as I love your poetry.  You always strike me as such a kind person.

Alison

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DS,

Ya know.  You made me laugh - and I know that is just what you meant to do.

A

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CG,

Thanks for drinking with me.  It is so much better than drinking alone.

A

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suthern,

I always have some to share with you.  Thank you for smiling and stopping by.

xoxoxo
Alison

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Rick,

Thank you.  Your reply warmed me right up.

Alison

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N,

Thank you so much.

A

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Yep, Sue ... sometimes it ain't that great a place to be - but the view is beautiful when the blues wash away.

A

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martiniat8,

I am so glad that you do.  

Thank you loads.

A

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